Sim Storytellers Challenge 001 and 004
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simstorytellers weekly challenges because I've barely had time to play the Sims these last few weeks. And most of that "gaming" time has been actually spent fixing my neighborhood instead of playing.
Since I'm finally able to play with my sims, I've been taking a few "flashback" pictures for future Broke updates. And when I found out today's prompt, I figured one of those pictures might work with it.
So, here are two drabbles. Man! It's been over a year since I last wrote a drabble! I'm not good at writing short stuff, but it's nice to try out a challenge now and then, right?
Both of these drabbles are related to the Broke Legacy. The second one has strong hints of what's coming up in the story ;).
Challenge 001: Welcome
Word Count: 89
It only took a warm gesture.
A gesture from a man who truly understood what being an outcast means.
A man who, despite the strong prejudice against his kind, had been able to start a new life here.
A life illuminated by the promise of a better future.
It only took that warm gesture to erase any trace of doubt from Beau's heart.
He had finally found a place where his “curse” would be no more.
He had finally found a place he would call home.
"Welcome to Strangetown, Beau."
______________________________
Challenge 004: Blame
Word Count: 142
Mild Spoilers for the Broke Legacy
He found it hidden between the bills and his sister’s belated Christmas card.
It was an empty white envelope. There was no way to know who it was sent to.
Somehow, Cosmo was certain that it was sent to him.
With trembling hands, he opened the envelope. There was only a single sheet of paper inside.
When he recognized the distinctive handwriting, he felt his blood freeze.
Terrified, he looked around for any signs of their presence.
But he was only surrounded by silence and nothing else.
The message was brief,
The exchange has been done. Your debt has been paid.
But its few words were strong enough to make him drop on his knees.
And as Cosmo Broke quietly sobbed, he thought of the innocent souls who were now suffering the consequences of his actions.
"I'm sorry... I'm so sorry..."
simstorytellers weekly challenges because I've barely had time to play the Sims these last few weeks. And most of that "gaming" time has been actually spent fixing my neighborhood instead of playing. Since I'm finally able to play with my sims, I've been taking a few "flashback" pictures for future Broke updates. And when I found out today's prompt, I figured one of those pictures might work with it.
So, here are two drabbles. Man! It's been over a year since I last wrote a drabble! I'm not good at writing short stuff, but it's nice to try out a challenge now and then, right?
Both of these drabbles are related to the Broke Legacy. The second one has strong hints of what's coming up in the story ;).
Challenge 001: Welcome
Word Count: 89
It only took a warm gesture.
A gesture from a man who truly understood what being an outcast means.
A man who, despite the strong prejudice against his kind, had been able to start a new life here.
A life illuminated by the promise of a better future.
It only took that warm gesture to erase any trace of doubt from Beau's heart.
He had finally found a place where his “curse” would be no more.
He had finally found a place he would call home.
"Welcome to Strangetown, Beau."
______________________________
Challenge 004: Blame
Word Count: 142
Mild Spoilers for the Broke Legacy
He found it hidden between the bills and his sister’s belated Christmas card.
It was an empty white envelope. There was no way to know who it was sent to.
Somehow, Cosmo was certain that it was sent to him.
With trembling hands, he opened the envelope. There was only a single sheet of paper inside.
When he recognized the distinctive handwriting, he felt his blood freeze.
Terrified, he looked around for any signs of their presence.
But he was only surrounded by silence and nothing else.
The message was brief,
The exchange has been done. Your debt has been paid.
But its few words were strong enough to make him drop on his knees.
And as Cosmo Broke quietly sobbed, he thought of the innocent souls who were now suffering the consequences of his actions.
"I'm sorry... I'm so sorry..."
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Date: 2008-04-24 06:32 am (UTC)And if you have been reading my legacy, theres going to be surprises coming up for ya :)
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Date: 2008-04-25 04:48 am (UTC)Well, I've been trying to post at least a couple "extra" pics while I work on a decent update. I don't have enough pictures for one yet, though.
But as soon as I'm done taking these "flashback" pictures, I promise I'll finally go back to Brokes full time :D.
I've just finished reading your legacy ^^. Poor, poor founder, she really has had awful luck so far! At least they finally found a treasure chest to help with the house finances, though. And the bit about Stalker!Calvin made me giggle :P.
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Date: 2008-04-24 06:42 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-04-25 04:52 am (UTC)Thank you very much! :)
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Date: 2008-04-24 12:58 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-04-25 04:50 am (UTC)Hee Hee...
I've thrown a couple hints here and there, so your suspicions might be right... ;)
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Date: 2008-04-24 08:50 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-04-25 04:51 am (UTC)I'll try to post an update as soon as possible. I'm done with my monthly reports and I'd like to have a new chapter ready by May 5th (the Broke's anniversary... yikes!).
Oh... so you also have an idea? Well, we'll see if you guessed right on the next update! ;)
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Date: 2008-04-29 12:08 pm (UTC)I need to get back to catching up on the Broke Legacy!
I need more time! Anyone? Who has more time they can give to me?
Great drabbles. Now then. . .where did I leave off with the Broke's?
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Date: 2008-04-29 12:11 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-04-30 01:04 am (UTC)